You make nice melody's in your songs but still....
For some reasons its not perfect, but you know how to make good songs and melodys.
Usally i can tell whats wrong with the song, but i dont know whats wrong with it. its just not perfect.
I'l give you a 8 for it, and im not a guy who spreads high numbers fast.
keep creating music and experiment a bit. you are close to get to the level or F777 and Bounce.