like the bass and power, but...
there should have been a other melody. the melody in this song is basicly crappy.
make up a better melody and dont chance anything else because i love everything else.
the transitions, chance of instruments, bass changes ect.
But the melody is the heart of the song IMO. so a 7 from me ;-)
Please do something with this advice because this is a awesome song if it was editted with a cooler melody.