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fair

its just a genre i like, but everything fits together. i cant say much about this song sorry. i'l give it a fair 7.

ErikMcClure responds:

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not a very good one.

The melody keep repeating and its just not a good song. im sorry Erik, i love the most of your music, but this song just aint that good. But you only spend 2-3 hours on it. Im planning on reviewing all of your songs, and i have to keep being fair!
the side instruments seem to fit well, but the melody just aint sounding nice, is to short and repeats to much.

ErikMcClure responds:

This was just for fun D:

Wow, my second hero on newgrounds

Ive listened really ALOT of songs on newgrounds, and im not one that gives out 10 very fast. But you....you are special!
You put your heart into the music.
I'm fan of Denny Scheidemesser that made and uploaded music on newgrounds(classical), and im glad i finally found another person i am fan of.
Now lets see if i can get in touch with you :)

everything fits in, every instrument, and the melody....the melody is soooo relaxing and good!
This song deserves a big 10! and its becouse i couldnt find anythign wrong about this song. Good job, and never stop making music!

ErikMcClure responds:

I'm a fan of Denny myself 8D Thanks!

more ambient style if you ask me

but still a pretty good song. but one of the best i've heard;)

nice!

Good classical songs, only the first instrument (the instrument box) gave me a feeling i was listening to midi or something like that. maby replace those with a other instrument. and maby replace the drums with something else :) but dont just delete them!
Its a good song, but can be made better;)

also a nice song!

Good build, good melody, feels good for a main menu for a game :)
what can i say more? its a good song!

finally a prety good classical song again :)

Good job on one of the most diffecult genre's. nice melody, nice side instruments.
Really nice song! it feels really epic!

DavidOrr responds:

Thanks!

nice melody!

Pretty good song with a nice melody. but i miss side instruments. this song could be better, but the main melody is good ;)

Hotplurplegnome responds:

thanks for that:D
yeah what i did really was update the old one with new sounds and make it more pro i guess

nice instruments and all

the song is well build, instruments are nice, and the flow is also nice. the only thing i miss, is the heart of the song, the melody. i dont really feel a catchy nice melody in this song. make anice melody, and then re-create this song. you got talent, but you need inspiration. thats what i can hear from this song.

Draco3988 responds:

i dont know how much more melodic i could make this without making it sound like some kinda fruity kids electronica. i go more for depth and song structure and i would rather it be hypnotic and entrancing (hence the reason its classified as trance) then having some overly melodic hook. It has heart, just not catchy melodic heart i guess. also this is the 3rd song ive ever made, i dont have the save file cause at the time i used the demo version of FL and it doesn't allow you to save so I can't modify it. But i like it how it is anyway. thanks for the input.

nice melody, but not the right genre.

I dont like thr trancy feeling with this song, but the melody is really nice. i'd love to hear a classical version of this song. and im not giving you an 7 becouse i dont like trance, becouse i love trance. Trance just doesnt fir in with this song. please make a classical version ;)

VGSongbird responds:

^_^
I may just do that.
Initially this "sloop" didn't have a set beat; it was strictly classical piano.

thank you for your feedback.

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